Homework (59, What crime is common in your city/country?)

Hello [이름],

We really need to experience a lot of things in life to learn and mature as a person.

We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.

I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.

T. Jeny

I do not know what crime is common in our country.

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But, I can see a lot of new crimes when I turn on the TV nowadays.

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Drugs, corruption, rankism, sex crime and big fire.

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Sadly, most crimes are related except big fire.
>>Sadly, most crimes are related except for the big fire.
Some government people use their position to put their relatives in a good position of the good and big company.

>>Some government people use their position to put their relatives in a good position in a big company.
 Moreover, people supply escort service to the person who has a big power to get a good chance in their business area.

>> Moreover, people supply escort service to the person who has the power to get a good chance in their business.
 Furthermore, some entertainers use drugs in the VIP room of the club to have sex with a girl easily and take an adult video without her agreement.

>>Furthermore, some entertainers use drugs in the VIP room in a club to have sex with a girl easily and take an adult video without her consent.

In addition, some police man was received money from the criminals to help their crime hiding as a secret.
>>In addition, some policemen received money from criminals to help them hide their secrets.

>>In addition, some policemen received money from criminals not to reveal their crimes.
 When I thought the first crime had almost finishes, I could see another person\'s name at the same crime.

>>When I crime is almost solved the same crime appears involving a different person.
 The issues are rotated every day like it will never be finished.

>>the issues are rotating every day as it will never be finished.

I think it is a kind of common crime in the word because it is related with the human nature.

>>I think same crimes happen all over the world because it is related to human nature.