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2015-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

hi! Today, thank you for your teaching. As I spoke english anytime, I felt be frustrated. Because I didn't speak even a easy sentence. So I would like to study enlish. When I don't remember easy word and accurate word at the class, I don't speak well. But I will effort to improve speaking skill and participate in our class actively. I wish I would like to be intimate each other.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I am so glad to have you in my class. I hope that you will feel comfortable with me. I like your attitude in the class because you show much eagerness to improve your skills. Don\'t worry; I am here to be your guide. Please feel free to raise your queries anytime. Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ hi!>> Correct Today, thank you for your teaching.>> Correct As I spoke english anytime, I felt be frustrated.>> I feel frustrated every time I speak English.  Because I didn\'t speak even a easy sentence.>> I can\'t construct even a simple sentence.  So I would like to study english.>> Correct When I don\'t remember easy word and accurate word at the class, I don\'t speak well.>> When I can\'t remember a word in class, I can\'t speak well.  But I will effort to improve speaking skill and participate in our class actively.>> But I will make an effort to improve my speaking skill and participate in our class actively.  I wish I would like to be intimate each other. >> I hope we could be intimate to each other.   

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