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2015-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Long time no see, Teacher. I've just got home from Thailand. I'm still tired because of the night flight. And I've got a tan skin after this trip. Anyway, see you tomorrow. What can you do today that you couldn't do a year ago? What will you be able to do at this time next year? A year ago, I couldn't speak English like this. I mostly concentrated on reading comprehension. One day last year, my academic advisor recommended to study speaking English. He told me that improving my English skill would be a great help to my academic career. So, I decided to study English by phone. And I'm still learning English now. Someday next year, I probably will speak English well than I do now.

강사 첨삭

Kaylee!!! I missed you so much! Welcome back! I\'m so looking forward to hearing your stories about Thailand. Thanks for doing your homework. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Long time no see, Teacher. >> CORRECT!I\'ve just got home from Thailand. >> CORRECT!I\'m still tired because of the night flight. >> CORRECT!And I\'ve got a tan skin after this trip. >> CORRECT!Anyway, see you tomorrow. >> CORRECT!A year ago, I couldn\'t speak English like this. >> CORRECT!I mostly concentrated on my reading comprehension. >> CORRECT!One day, last year, my academic advisor recommended me to study speaking English. >> CORRECT! >> adviserHe told me that improving my English skill would be a great help to my academic career. >> CORRECT!So, I decided to study English by phone. >> CORRECT! OR >> So I decided to take a phone English class.And I\'m still learning English now. >> CORRECT!Someday next year, I probably will speak English well than I do now. >> Sometime next year, I would probably be able to speak English better than I do now.  

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