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2015-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. It's windy day. I heard that the typhoon, 'NANGKA' is getting close to Korea. Anyway, I hope you have a nice weekend. If a woman you don't know came banging at your door, in the middle of the night, frantically asking for help, would you let her in and help her? What would you do? First of all, this makes me think of the matter of right and wrong. In the light of that view point, I should help her unconditionally. In general, we accept helping people in need as what is right. However, when it comes to security issue, it's not that easy to judge. If I get to run into danger in the middle of helping her, it would cause both of us bad results. In this case, calling the police would be a more wise response. However, between right and security, I still can't decide what to do easily.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Welcome back! Well, it\'s still raining cats and dogs here in my city. I haven\'t seen the sun for like two weeks now. Stay safe, okay! Thanks for doing your homework. It\'s actually a difficult situation. Our humanity and logic would often clash whenever we encounter dilemmas like this. I would like to share this quote with you. It\'s from one of my favorite books. \"Remember, if the time should come when you have to make a choice between what is right, and what is easy, remember what happened to a boy who was good and kind and brave because he strayed across the path of Lord Voldemort.\" ^^ Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s a windy day. >> CORRECT! I heard that the typhoon, \'NANGKA\' is getting close to Korea. >> CORRECT! Anyway, I hope you\'ll have a nice weekend. >> CORRECT! First of all, this makes me think of the matter of right and wrong. >> CORRECT! In the light of that view point, I should help her unconditionally. >> In light of that point of view, I should help her unconditionally.In general, we accept helping people in need as what is right. >> In general, we know that helping people in need is right. However, when it comes to security issue, it\'s not that easy to judge. >> CORRECT! >> safetyIf I get to run into danger in the middle of helping her, it would cause both of us bad results. >> If I run into some danger while helping her out, it would cause trouble for both of us.In this case, calling the police would be a more wise response. >> CORRECT! >> wiserHowever, between right and security, I still can\'t decide what to do easily. >> However, between what is right and what is safe, I still can\'t easily decide what to do.  

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