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2015-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Yes, I think our society is too dependent on technology. When I go outside without my cell phone, I feel lonesome. I start to find it. If I notice that I put my cell phone in my home. I go back to home to get it. When I look for some new place to go, I search for information using my cell phone. And I input my schedule in my phone. If I were lost my phone, I would felt confused. The world is changing very rapidly. New technology emerges every day. We don't know what is the last.

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Hello [이름] Don\'t you worry to much cause talking with you makes my day complete.Thank you for answering your homework!!! Nice job!!! T. Jeny Yes, I think our society is too dependent on technology. >>correctWhen I go outside without my cell phone, I feel lonesome. >>I feel lonesome whenever I forget my cellphone at home. I start to find it. If I notice that I put my cell phone in my home. >>If I left it at home, I will really look for it. I go back to home to get it. >>And  will go home to get it. When I look for some new place to go, I search for information using my cell phone. >>When I want to go somewhere, I look for an information using my cell phone. And I input my schedule in my phone. >>I also write my schedule on my phone. If I were lost my phone, I would felt confused. >>I will feel uneasy when I will lose my phone. The world is changing very rapidly. >>The world is rapidly changing. New technology emerges every day. >>correctWe don\'t know what is the last. >>We don\'t already know the latest techonology nowadays.

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