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Yes, I think our society is too dependent on technology.
When I go outside without my cell phone, I feel lonesome.
I start to find it. If I notice that I put my cell phone in my home. I go back to home to get it.
When I look for some new place to go, I search for information using my cell phone. And I input my schedule in my phone. If I were lost my phone, I would felt confused. The world is changing very rapidly. New technology emerges every day.
We don't know what is the last.
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Yes, I think our society is too dependent on technology.
>>correctWhen I go outside without my cell phone, I feel lonesome.
>>I feel lonesome whenever I forget my cellphone at home.
I start to find it. If I notice that I put my cell phone in my home.
>>If I left it at home, I will really look for it.
I go back to home to get it.
>>And will go home to get it.
When I look for some new place to go, I search for information using my cell phone.
>>When I want to go somewhere, I look for an information using my cell phone.
And I input my schedule in my phone.
>>I also write my schedule on my phone.
If I were lost my phone, I would felt confused.
>>I will feel uneasy when I will lose my phone.
The world is changing very rapidly.
>>The world is rapidly changing.
New technology emerges every day.
>>correctWe don\'t know what is the last.
>>We don\'t already know the latest techonology nowadays.
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