homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!!
I want you to to assess yourself and set up your goals, these goals are ownership or your learnings. These could motivate you achieve the goals you want in life. Speaking the English could be difficult at times but I know you can go it!!!!
Please check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistakes.
T. Jeny
Parents want to their children are to be perfect person.
>>Parents want their children to be good people.
Because they love them too much.
>>correct
>>Because they love their children so much.
They tend to live instead of their child life.
>>They tend to give everything for their children.
They mignt think that to be perfect person is to live perfect life.
>>They think they should be good model for their children to imitate.
But Parents have to know what they want is different what their children want.
>>But parents should know that they want different things.
Some children like study, some children like play sport.
>>Some children like to study and some like to play sports.
All children have different disposition.
>>correct
Parents should admit this point.
>>Parents should accept this fact.
They just give opportunity for their children to choose their life.
>>They just give their children the opportunity to choose their life.
It might be well in school but or not.
>>They might be good in school or not.
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