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2015-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. I felt relieved to hear that the rain stoped in your city. It's not raining yet in my city. If it will rain in the afternoon, I will tell you about it. Anyway, take care~! Nowadays, road rage incidents are very common in Korea. What would you do if you encounter an angry and rude driver on the road? Are you going to stop and argue with him or are you just going to let it go? Why? It's usual to hear that there are some road rage incidents here in Korea. I guess road rage incidents were already prevalent in the past. These days, we just can easily see the video about road rage incidents thanks to the spread of vehicle black box. When we see that video, it's really dangerous to engage the road rage. We'd better to call the police according to the law which prohibits the road rage. Also, it can be a good idea that you secure some evidence of the road rage.

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Hi Kaylee! Thank you for doing your homework. Your opinion was on point and very practical. I just need you to take note of some mistakes in your sentence structure. Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT!I felt relieved to hear that the rain stoped in your city. >> CORRECT! >> stoppedIt\'s not raining yet in my city. >> It\'s not yet raining in my city.If it will rain in the afternoon, I will tell you about it. >> If it rains in the afternoon, I\'ll tell you about it. Anyway, take care~! >> CORRECT!It\'s usual to hear that there are some road rage incidents here in Korea. >> CORRECT! I guess road rage incidents were already prevalent in the past. >> CORRECT!These days, we just can easily see the video about road rage incidents thanks to the spread of vehicle black box. >> CORRECT! >> advent of the black box in vehiclesWhen we see that video, it\'s really dangerous to engage in the road rage. >> CORRECT! OR >> When we see that video, we realize that it\'s really dangerous to get involved in a road rage.We\'d better to call the police according to the law which prohibits the road rage.>> We\'d better call the police and abide by the laws. Also, it can be a good idea that you secure some evidence of the road rage. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s also better to secure some evidence of the road rage.  

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