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2015-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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The best part of waking up is my wil. I don't wake up in the morning. But for I study important thing last year , I wake up very early and I went to study in the morning because I had a strong will. These days I think I become loose my will. So I don't wake up early. However I will recover my will like last year.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I admire you for your diligence in learning English. Keep it up! Take care and have a great time! T. JanE ^^ The best part of waking up is my wil.>> The best part of waking up is my will.  I don\'t wake up in the morning. >> I didn\'t like waking up early in the morning.  But for I study important thing last year , I wake up very early and I went to study in the morning because I had a strong will. >> However, since I started studying something important last year, I wake up early because of my strong will.  These days I think I become loose my will. >> These days, I think I\'m losing my will.  So I don\'t wake up early. >> Correct However I will recover my will like last year. >> Correct

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