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2015-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher. I'm going to go to school to take an English conversation class. The teacher gave his students a homework to watch some American sitcom. The title was "Modern Family". Actually, I had difficulty to understand the actors' dialogue, because they spoke too fast. Anyway, I watched it. ^^ If the cashier at the grocery store gives you $10 too much change, do you tell her? Explain your answer. I would definitely give it to the cashier. The amount of money is not important. Whether it is much or not, I should return her/him that money. I have learned that honesty is the best value which I should keep in mind. Also, I need to show my son that honesty is right, so we pursue honest life. I'm sure that he will grow up as a honest person thanks to our effort.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Great job in this homework! I like how you expressed your opinion and ideas here. Honesty is indeed the best policy. ^^ Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, Teacher. >> CORRECT! I\'m going to go to school to take an English conversation class. >> CORRECT! The teacher gave his students a homework to watch some American sitcom. >> CORRECT! The title was \"Modern Family\". >> CORRECT! Actually, I had difficulty to understand the actors\' dialogue, because they spoke too fast. >> CORRECT!  OR >> Actually, it was difficult for me to understand the actors\' dialogue because they spoke too fast.Anyway, I watched it. ^^ >> CORRECT! I would definitely give it to the cashier. >> CORRECT! The amount of money is not important. >> CORRECT! Whether it is much or not, I should return her/him that money. >> CORRECT! >> a lotI have learned that honesty is the best value which I should keep in mind. >> CORRECT! >> thatAlso, I need to show my son that honesty is right, so we pursue honest life. >> I also need to show my son that honesty is right, so we should pursue an honest life. I\'m sure that he will grow up as a honest person thanks to our effort. >> I\'m sure that he will grow up as an honest person, thanks to our effort.

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