Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No,i think fashin model must use clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Alice ^^
Happy Wednesday.
How are you? Thank you for doing your homework.
How was your first day with your new teacher?
I hope that you are had a wonderful time with her.
Yes, I agree with you. They should be used for clothes.
But they could also be endorsers of cars. ^^
Thanks for your understanding.
Teacher Nina
No,i think fashin model must use clothes.
>> Did you mean: No, I think fashion models should be used for clothes.
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