Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
I eventually found "How I Met Your Mother" on the internet.
I was really surprised that it has 10 seasons.
As you said, it seems to be really popular.
If a friend of yours has really bad breath, would you tell them? How would you do it without hurting their feelings?
I had a similar experience when I was a university student.
In those days, one of my friends who is still single I told you before, had bad breath.
Friends and I couldn't tell her about her bad breath.
We already had known that her bad breath was resulted from her health disorder.
Then, we guessed that she had a stomach problem temporally.
We thought that we should bear her bad breath because it wasn't caused by her fault.
However, if it was due to her bad living habits we'd better to straighten out her life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Great job! I hope that you can watch that sitcom. It\'s one of the best sitcoms I\'ve seen. You will definitely crack up while watching it.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! I eventually found \"How I Met Your Mother\" on the internet.
>> CORRECT! I was really surprised that it has 10 seasons.
>> CORRECT! As you said, it seems to be really popular.
>> CORRECT! I had a similar experience when I was a university student.
>> CORRECT! In those days, one of my friends who is still single I told you before, had bad breath.
>> Back then, one of my friends, who is still single now and whom I have told you about, had bad breath.Friends and I couldn\'t tell her about her bad breath.
>> My friends and I couldn\'t tell her about her bad breath.We already had known that her bad breath was resulted from her health disorder.
>> We had already known that her bad breath was a result of a health disorder.
Then, we guessed that she had a stomach problem temporally.
>> Then, we guessed that she must have had a temporary stomach problem.We thought that we should bear her bad breath because it wasn\'t caused by her fault.
>> We thought that we should keep it to ourselves because it wasn\'t her fault that she had bad breath.
However, if it was due to her bad living habits we\'d better to straighten out her life.
>> However, if it was due to her bad habits then we would have straightened her out.
OR >> However, if it was due to her bad habits then we would have told her about it flat out.
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