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2015-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I want a good personality, manner and kind partner. And I want to have the same tendency, hobby such as me . Because If we are different. we can fight sometimes. I would like to have a good impression and funny partner. Becasue I want to live interesting lifetime with my partner. today, have a lively day and see you later!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Well, I hope you have that kind of partner now. If you don\'t have that kind of partner yet, I hope you fill be able to find him someday. Take care! T. JanE ^^ I want a good personality, manner and kind partner.>> I want a kind partner who has good personality and manner.  And I want to have the same tendency, hobby such as me .>> I also want him to have the same tendecies and hobbies with mine.  Because If we are different. we can fight sometimes.>> If we are different, we may fight sometimes.  I would like to have a good impression and funny partner. >> I would like to have a partner who is funny and has good impression.  Becasue I want to live interesting lifetime with my partner.>> I want to make my life interesting with my partner. today, have a lively day and see you later! >> Have a lively day and see you later! 

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