homework

2015-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He had to hire someone who work was piling up. 2. A lot of people gathered there but no one could do anything to save the child. 3. The girls did what even their parents could not do. 4. She started crying when I asked her that she hadn’t done any work. 5.If you want your money back, you will have to return the bit of wisdom you took from me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Nice one you got a perfect score!!!! You made a good job on your homework. Please don\'t forget to memorize or remember the words so that you can use it on your daily conversation. I encourage you to read and meet new words so that it can improve your vocabulary skills.

T. Jeny

 

1. He had to hire someone who work was piling up.

>>correct
2. A lot of people gathered there but no one could do anything to save the child.

>>correct
3. The girls did what even their parents could not do.

>>correct
4. She started crying when I asked her that she hadn’t done any work.

>>correct
5.If you want your money back, you will have to return the bit of wisdom you took from me.

>>correct

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