Homework

Hello my teacher. Since I started to English study with you, It is my first homework. I'm little tired yet I can't sleep. So I decide to do homework before I go to work. I appreciated your advice and fighting message. Usually your told me "positive view of life." Sometimes I forgot the reason why was I to do something. For example exercise, study, many housework and looking for a job, saving money etc. Naturally I consider that everything is aid to achieve my goal. But I don't know that what is my goal in my life. Recently I agonize values of my life. I agree that teaching is how to make a good living is problem. Because many people said "The money is very important in my life" Actually If I have many money, I can achieve easily a lot of thing. But the success life is not one way. These days I accept my mistake and a few pay. haha. As you know that I'm very young. haha.

Hi, dear [이름]! (^_^) Thank you very much for writing in our composition board. I heard it\'s really hot in Korea right now so don\'t forget to drink lots of water. I\'m a very positive kind of person and I\'d like the people around me, including my students, to be positive as well. With a positive attitude, we experience pleasant and happy feelings. It brings brightness to the eyes, more energy, and happiness. Our whole being broadcasts good will, happiness and success. Even our health is affected in a beneficial way. We walk tall, our voice is more powerful and our body language shows the way we fee. ^^ Positive and negative thinking are both contagious. Negative thoughts, words and attitude, create negative and unhappy feelings, moods and behavior. When the mind is negative, poisons are released into the blood, which cause more unhappiness and negativity. This is the reason why negative people often fail, get frustrated and disappointed. So avoid negative thoughts because they won\'t do you any good. You are young, intelligent and talented. Being successful does not happen over night. It takes hard work, perseverance, patience and a positive attitude to get there.Stay positive always [이름]. I know you will succeed soon.Don\'t forget me okay? ^^I would love to have your autograph when you become a famous writer someday. See you again on Monday. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry Hello my teacher. >> CORRECT! ^^ OR >> Hi, my teacher. Since I started to English study with you, It is my first homework. >> Since I started studying English with you, this is my first homework. OR >> This is my first homework since I started studying English with you.I\'m little tired yet I can\'t sleep. >> I\'m a little tired but I can\'t sleep.So I decide to do homework before I go to work. >> So I decide to do my homework before I go to work. OR >> That\'s why I decided to do my homework before I go to work. I appreciated your advice and fighting message.>> CORRECT! OR >> I appreciated your advice and encouraging message. Usually your told me \"positive view of life.\">> You usually tell me about \"positive views in life\".Sometimes I forgot the reason why was I to do something. >> Sometimes I forget the reason why I want to do something.For example exercise, study, many housework and looking for a job, saving money etc. >> For example, doing exercise, studying, finishing household chores, looking for a job, and saving money. Naturally I consider that everything is aid to achieve my goal. >> Naturally, I consider all of these things as essential in order to achieve my goal. But I don\'t know that what is my goal in my life. >> But I don\'t know what is my goal in life.Recently I agonize values of my life. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Recently, I try to identify the things I really value in my life.I agree that teaching is how to make a good living is problem. >> I agree that teaching is a good way to make a living. Because many people said \"The money is very important in my life\" >> Many people say that, \"Money is an important part of life\".Actually If I have many money, I can achieve easily a lot of thing. >> Actually, if I have a lot of money, I can easily achieve a lot of things. But the success life is not one way. >> But success in life is not one way.These days I accept my mistake and a few pay. haha. >> Thesed days, I accept my mistake and take a few pay.As you know that I\'m very young. haha. >> As you know, I\'m very young.