Homework

Hello, Teacher. The weather is still not good here in Korea. So, I think it's better to stay at home today. Anyway,acorrding to 'deficiency', how about 'adversity'? I'm still pondering a proper vocabulary. below is the next part. I did it without any private education although private lessons after school were common in those days. At that time, my father, the breadwinner of my family, was a taxi driver and we were in a tight financial situation. Therefore, I naturally didn't get enough financial support from my family regarding my study. However, this adversity made me became a mentally stronger person. I had tried to overcome my poor surroundings through my effort and passion for study. This eventually created some stunning results. I got a scholarship for my good grades throughout university. I also graduated at the top in my department.

Hi Kaylee! I think \'adversity\' is the word that you are looking for. Good job! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! The weather is still not good here in Korea. >> CORRECT! So, I think it\'s better to stay at home today. >> CORRECT! Anyway,acorrding to \'deficiency\', how about \'adversity\'? >> Anyway, instead of deficiency, how about \'adversity\'? I\'m still pondering a proper vocabulary. >> I\'m still thinkint about a proper vocabulary.below is the next part.>> CORRECT! I did it without any private education although private lessons after school were common in those days. >> CORRECT! At that time, my father, the breadwinner of my family, was a taxi driver and we were in a tight financial situation. >> CORRECT! Therefore, I naturally didn\'t get enough financial support from my family regarding my study. >> CORRECT! >> for my studiesHowever, this adversity made me became a mentally stronger person. >> However, this adversity made me become a mentally stronger person. I had tried to overcome my poor surroundings through my effort and passion for studying. >> CORRECT! This eventually created some stunning results. >> CORRECT! I got a scholarship for my good grades throughout the university. >> CORRECT! I also graduated at the top of my class in my department. >> CORRECT!