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Hello, Teacher. In today's question about after 100 years, I was unimaginative. I'm still unimaginative, but if you ask me, I'd like to see my descendants in the future. I really wonder whether they follow my family's lesson or not. Anyway, below is the next part of my writing. It is easy to think that growing in poor surroundings is unfortune. However, when I looked back on my life, I realized that adversity in my youth was the driving force of my life. I dare to say that I could learn and develop until now, thanks to my adversity. subtitle : Abundant Experiences through various roles Before starting my master's degree in the spring of 2013, there was a several-years gap. In those days I had worked in the Marketing Department of [Company]. Despite my passion and expectations about studying, I didn't have enough financial support when I graduated from university. Instead of enrolling in graduate school, I chose to be an office worker.

Hi Kaylee! I checked some of your sentences below. Please review them and let me know if I misunderstood something. Good luck with your paper. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! In today\'s question about \"after 100 years\", I was unimaginative. >> CORRECT! OR >> In today\'s question about what would happen after 100 years, I didn\'t use my imagination.I\'m still unimaginative, but if you ask me, I\'d like to see my descendants in the future. >> CORRECT! I really wonder whether they follow my family\'s lesson or not. >> I\'m really wondering whether they would follow my family\'s traditions or not.Anyway, below is the next part of my writing. >> CORRECT! It is easy to think that growing in poor surroundings is unfortune. >> CORRECT! >> unfortunate However, when I looked back on my life, I realized that the adversity in my youth was the driving force of my life. >> CORRECT! I dare to say that I could learn and develop until now, thanks to my adversity. >> I dare say that I was able to learn and develop now thanks to my adversities.subtitle : Abundant Experiences through various roles>> CORRECT! Before starting my master\'s degree in the spring of 2013, there was a several-years gap. >> CORRECT! In those days I had worked in the Marketing Department of [Company]. >> CORRECT! Despite my passion and expectations about studying, I didn\'t have enough financial support when I graduated from the university. >> CORRECT! Instead of enrolling in graduate school, I chose to be an office worker. >> CORRECT!