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If you have a lot of money, what do you want to do? First, I will go to trip. Especailly I would like to go to Europe. so I will ride a euro star. Second, I will learn sports and instruments. Most of all, the most things to learn are shooting and cello. Third, I will find restarants. As I watched program of chef's cooking, I really want to eat foods which they made. have a good day~

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! you did a great job in writing this. Kep it up! Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ If you have a lot of money, what do you want to do?>> Correct First, I will go to trip.>> First, I will go on a trip.  Especailly I would like to go to Europe. so I will ride a euro star.>> I would like to go to Europe to ride a Euro Star.  Second, I will learn sports and instruments.>> Second, I would learn to play some sports and instruments.  Most of all, the most things to learn are shooting and cello.>> I\'d like to learn shooting and the cello.  Third, I will find restarants.>> Third, I would look for good restaurants.  As I watched program of chef\'s cooking, I really want to eat foods which they made.>> I really want to eat the foods that the chefs on TV cook. have a good day~ >> Correct