HOMEWORK

2015-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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HOMEWORK: Answer the following: Describe your favorite place in your house. My house is a small apartments. In living room I used to spend my time with my family. So I like this place. There is a comfy sofa and a bookcase, a play table. My son plays with toys in the living room.

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An amazing evening to you, [이름]. Wow! You have minimal errors on your homework. I commend you for that. Your sentences are improving. I only noticed few errors so good job for that. Just continue to improve on your sentence construction because you can integrate that in your speaking skill. Practice more, okay? See you in class in a few minutes.   ~~T. Jamie^^   My house is a small apartments. >> My house is a small apartment. In living room I used to spend my time with my family. >> In the living room, I used to spend my time with my family. OR: >> I used to spend my time with my family in the living room.So I like this place. >> CORRECT OR: >> So I like the place.There is a comfy sofa and a bookcase, a play table. >> There is a comfy sofa, a bookcase, and a play table.My son plays with toys in the living room. >> CORRECT OR: >> My son plays with his toys in the living room.

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