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Hello, Teacher. It's a little long today. However, I believe that I provided myself with abundant experiences during that period. While working there, I took steps from the status of ordinary employee to a section head. Therefore, I had experienced both a subordinate and a superior. Furthermore, I got married and became a mother. This made me carry out various roles such as a wife, a mother, and a daughter-in-law. Combining work and family responsibilities, I faced with various difficulties and got to understand some diverse aspects of life. I think my abundant experiences are of great advantage to study politics. The reason is that politics is the field of study which pursues to make people's lives better. My specific major is, moreover, political thought. Starting point for political thought is such questions as : what is the better life. Comparing with other students who never have had other roles except for a student, I'm sure that I have strength to study political thought.

Hi Kaylee! I checked your composition. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT!It\'s a little long today.>> CORRECT!However, I believe that I provided myself with abundant experiences during that period. >> CORRECT! While working there, I took steps from the status of ordinary employee to a section head. >> CORRECT! Therefore, I had experienced being both a subordinate and a superior. >> CORRECT! Furthermore, I got married and became a mother. >> CORRECT! This made me carry out various roles such as a wife, a mother, and a daughter-in-law. >> CORRECT! Combining work and family responsibilities, I was faced with various difficulties and got to understand some diverse aspects of life.>> CORRECT!I think my abundant experiences are of great advantage to study politics. >> CORRECT! The reason is that politics is the field of study which pursues to make people\'s lives better. >> CORRECT! My specific major is, moreover, political thought. >> CORRECT! Starting point for political thought is such questions as : what is the better life. >> The starting point for political thought is questions such as: which is a better life? Comparing with other students who never have had other roles except for being a student, I\'m sure that I have strength to study political thought. >> CORRECT! >> I have an advantage in studying political thought.