Homework

2015-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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HOMEWORK: Answer the following: What do you do outside of work? Describe any hobbies you have, sports you participate in, or other activities you regularly enjoy. In a days, I used to play a PC online game after work. In a weekends, I used to go outside with my family. Sometimes, We are going to a camping and a hiking, a watching movie.

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Happy Wednesday You don\'t fail to amaze me on the improvement that you are showing. Such a great job! Oh my! This is our last day of class and we will resume on August 10. Anyway, take care on your trip and tell me everything that had happened when you get back. See you in class later on. Bye. ~~T. Jamie^^   In a days, I used to play a PC online game after work. >> YOU MEAN TO SAY: In my free time after work, I used to play online games on my PC. OR: >> Sometimes after work, I used to play online games on my PC.In a weekends, I used to go outside with my family. >> I used to go out with my family on weekends. OR: >> Every weekend, I used to go out with my family. OR: >> I used to spend time with my family outside during the weekend. Sometimes, We are going to a camping and a hiking, a watching movie. >> Sometimes, we go camping and hiking and watch a movie.

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