homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Having the courage to push yourself in writing an essay can be a big step for you to improve your skills, even if the topics could be sometimes difficult. The most important thing to do is to create a plan and follow that plan. Start with your English learning goals, and then make a specific plan to succeed.
I\'ve created good sentences for our homework. That\'s good!!!!
Great day ahead!!!!
T. Jeny
Hi Jeny
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I had the first class for IELTS.
>>I ahd a firdst class in IELTS.
It was not used to study IELTS for me.
>>I am not used to studying IELTS.
But I had great time with you.
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Thank you for your sincerely attitude.
>>Thank you for your behavior.
See you next class. Bye^^
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I think It is good for children to grow up in the countryside.
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There are so many reasons.
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I can suggest several things.
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At first, Eco-friendly environment affects children\'s health condition.
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Second, Good relationship in the countryside helps making positive human relationship.
>>Secondly, having a good relationship in the countryside helps make a positive human relationship.
third, Slow life third, in the countryside adds to creative thinking for children.
>>Lastly, a slow pace of lifestyle improves children to be creative.
These are the reasons that I hand up for countryside than city.
>>These are the reasons that I prefer to live in the countryside than in the city
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