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2015-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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My favorite speech is 'manners make man' from 'Kingsman: the secret service' movie. As I went through the experience, I agree to this speech. I look very nice to people having manners. And people having manner do respective action. especially, when main character spoke this speech with the action, it's very wonderful and I fell in love. have a energetic today!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I like that movie you wrote about! It was a very good one! Well, I agree with that [이름]e. Indeed, manners make a man. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ My favorite speech is \'manners make man\' from \'Kingsman: the secret service\' movie.>> My favorite movie speech is \"Manners make a man\", from \'Kingsman: The Secret Service\'.  As I went through the experience, I agree to this speech.>> As I experience a lot of things, I agree with it.  I look very nice to people having manners. >> I look nicely at people who have good manners.  And people having manner do respective action.>> People who have good manners do respective actions.  especially, when main character spoke this speech with the action, it\'s very wonderful and I fell in love.>> When the main character said this [이름]e, it was very wonderful that I fell in love. have a energetic today! >> Have a lively day! 

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