Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Techer.
I postponed my tomorrow's class.
I'm having a meeting tonight with my friends to celebrate one friend's returning to Korea from China.
So, I guess I will drink a lot tonight.^^
Please, forgive me!
Today's writing is about purpose going on the doctor's course.
It is said that getting a job after obtaining a doctor's degree for political thought is like getting blood from a stone. Nevertheless, I went on the doctor's course for the purpose of two aspects.
Subtitle : The Quality of Politics Determines The Quality of Life
I'm really interested in a better life for all of us. In addition, I believe that politics could change our world. When we see the different quality of life between North and South Korea, we can realize that the quality of politics determines the quality of life. This is also true of us in the future. Therefore, we must not stop concerns about the good politics we can create in the future.
강사 첨삭
KAYLEE!!! I received your package today! Oh my gosh! I was so over the moon when I saw what\'s inside! Thank you so much! I made a video message and I think you can see that on the website tomorrow or next week. The manager will upload it. THANK YOU!
Here are your corrections. ^^
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Techer.
>> CORRECT!
>> TeacherI postponed my tomorrow\'s class.
>> I postponed my class for tomorrow.
I\'m having a meeting tonight with my friends to celebrate one friend\'s returning to Korea from China.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I\'m going to meet with my friends tonight to welcome back another friend from her trip to China. - betterSo, I guess I will drink a lot tonight.^^
>> CORRECT!Please, forgive me!>> CORRECT!Today\'s writing is about purpose going on the doctor\'s course.>> Today\'s writing is about my purpose of taking up my doctorate degree.
It is said that getting a job after obtaining a doctor\'s degree for political thought is like getting blood from a stone.
>> CORRECT!
Nevertheless, I went on the doctor\'s course for the purpose of two aspects.
>> Nevertheless, I took up my doctorate degree for two purposes.
Subtitle : The Quality of Politics Determines The Quality of Life
>> CORRECT!I\'m really interested in a better life for all of us.
>> CORRECT!
In addition, I believe that politics could change our world.
>> CORRECT!
When we see the different quality of life between North and South Korea, we can realize that the quality of politics determines the quality of life.
>> CORRECT!
>> will
This is also true of us in the future.
>> This holds the truth for us in the future.
Therefore, we must not stop our concerns about the good politics that we can create in the future.
>> CORRECT!
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