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2015-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello Jane! It is funny today and I will expect to talk something on monday. Have a nice day! The title is 'relationsip is important' As I experience something, I relize that relationship with person is important to me. Last year I worked part time job, I mistaked a little to co-worker. So I apologized her truly. She took my apology outwardly but said badly about me severely. However co-workers had sympathy me. Because my impresstion and relationship was good among people but she was usually famous to trouble maker and had bad reputation. That time I was very suprised and I relized and the importance of relationship.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! I am really looking forward to what you\'re going to tell me on Monday. Enjoy and have a wonderful weekend! T. JanE ^^ Hello Jane!>> Correct It is funny today and I will expect to talk something on monday.>> I had fun today and I\'m looking forward to talking to you on Monday.  Have a nice day!>> Correct The title is \'Relationsip is Important\'>> Correct As I experience something, I relize that relationship with person is important to me.>> Because of my experience, I realized that relationship is important.  Last year I worked part time job, I mistaked a little to co-worker. >> Last year, in my part time job, I made a little mistake to my co-worker.  So I apologized her truly. >> I apologized to her sincerely.  She took my apology outwardly but said badly about me severely. >> She pretended to accept my apology then she said bad things about me. However co-workers had sympathy me. Because my impresstion and relationship was good among people but she was usually famous to trouble maker and had bad reputation. >> However, my co-workers sympathized with me because they have good impression of me, while she was known for being a trouble-maker and for having a bad reputation.  That time I was very suprised and I relized and the importance of relationship. >> That time I was very surprised and I realized the importance of relationship. 

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