Homework

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition making: Write an essay of at least 5 sentences regarding the following topic. Describe a memorable birthday celebration. I'm worry about you will think that my life is so dry. My family don't feel importance at special day, like birthday or christmas or parent's day. So I don't have special memory, but I'll try to answer. My memorable birthday celebration is my 12th birthday. It was great time in my life. Before my birthday, I gave some invitation card to my friends of academy. But the day of my birthday, I was sick, so I coudn't go td academy class, and I didn't expect them to come to my home. So I didn't prepare anything. But they were come to my home. I was so happy and touched. And when I saw them, I felt get well. And we ate and played long time. So it is my memorable day.

Hello [이름], It\'s Monday again! Thank you for making an essay. Wow! You really have nice friends. ^^ See you later. --Teacher Genie--    I\'m worry about you will think that my life is so dry. >> I\'m worried that you might think my life is so plain. >> OR: I\'m worried about what you would think of my life. My family don\'t feel importance at special day, like birthday or christmas or parent\'s day. >> My family doesn\'t give too much importance to different occasions, like birthdays, Christmas or Parent\'s day. So I don\'t have special memory, but I\'ll try to answer. >> So I don\'t have a special memory of my birthday celebration, but I\'ll try to give you an answer. My memorable birthday celebration is my 12th birthday. >> My memorable birthday celebration was on my 12th birthday. It was great time in my life. >> It was a great time of my life. Before my birthday, I gave some invitation card to my friends of academy. >> Before my birthday, I gave some invitation cards to my friends in our academy. But the day of my birthday, I was sick, so I coudn\'t go td academy class, and I didn\'t expect them to come to my home. So I didn\'t prepare anything. >> BETTER: But on the day of my birthday, I got sick, so I couldn\'t go to our academy class. I didn\'t expect them to come to our house, so I wasn\'t able to prepare anything. But they were come to my home. >> But they came to visit me in our house. I was so happy and touched. >> Correct And when I saw them, I felt get well. >> And when I saw them, I felt that I was already well. And we ate and played long time. >> We ate and played for a long time. So it is my memorable day. >> So for me, it was my memorable day.