homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good mornig teacher!
thank you today and have a good day!
My life is a infinite challenge.
Because I changed something much and now.
my personality is changing countiually.
And although I was static formely, I had activety action now.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! Whoa! I like your answer! I hope that you will always have fun facing the infinite challenge in your life. Take care and have a good day!
T. JanE ^^
Good morning teacher!>> Correct
thank you today and have a good day!>> Thank you for today. Have a good day! My life is a infinite challenge.>> My life is an infinite challenge.
Because I changed something much and now.>> I\'ve changed a lot then and now.
my personality is changing countiually.>> My personality is changing continually.
And although I was static formely, I had activety action now.
>> Although I was formerly an introvert, now I am active and outgoing.
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