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2015-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Good mornig teacher! thank you today and have a good day! My life is a infinite challenge. Because I changed something much and now. my personality is changing countiually. And although I was static formely, I had activety action now.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Whoa! I like your answer! I hope that you will always have fun facing the infinite challenge in your life. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Good morning teacher!>> Correct thank you today and have a good day!>> Thank you for today. Have a good day! My life is a infinite challenge.>> My life is an infinite challenge.  Because I changed something much and now.>> I\'ve changed a lot then and now.  my personality is changing countiually.>> My personality is changing continually.  And although I was static formely, I had activety action now. >> Although I was formerly an introvert, now I am active and outgoing. 

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