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2015-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I watched movie alone last week in my house. The title is Midnight in Paris. It is about a treavling story of a couple in Paris. But finally, the man parts with the woman because they can't understand each other. The man goes to the old times every midnight. So he meet many artist. They are Picaso, Paul Gouguin...... . I am a art teacher who love artists. And I like a raining street as like as he does. 1. My uncle lives in Mexico City. She lives in Mexico City. 2. My friends aren't coming. They aren't coming. 3. Mrs. [Name] is studying English. He is studying English. 4. You and I have to talk about the test. We have to talk about the test. 5. Can you help me? Yes, I can help you. 6. The tree is going to fall. It is going to fall. 7. John and his girlfriend had an argument. They had an argument. 8. Jim and I are the same age. We are the same age. 9. My passport is in my bag. It is in my bag. 10. My cousin George just graduated from high school. He just graduated from high school.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ma\'am. ^^

Good afternoon!

I am so happy that you sent a composition again today. ^.^

I want to watch the movie that you mentioned below.

You told some details about it. And I think it is really interesting. ^.^

Thanks to you!

I will search that movie this weekend.

You did a good job with your homework.

Please go over the corrections below.

Have a good day.

Teacher Nina

I watched movie alone last week in my house.

>> I watched a movie alone last week in my house.

>> OR: I watched a movie alone at home last week.

The title is Midnight in Paris.

>> correct

>> Better: The title of the movie is, \"Midnight in Paris\".

It is about a treavling story of a couple in Paris.

>> It is about a couple traveling in Paris.
>> OR: It is a story of a couple traveling in Paris.

But finally, the man parts with the woman because they can\'t understand each other.

>> Did you mean: But the man parted ways with the women because they can\'t understand each other.

>> OR: But the man broke up with the woman because they can\'t understand each other.

The man goes to the old times every midnight.

>> The man goes to the old places every midnight.

So he meet many artist.

>> So he met many artists.

They are Picaso, Paul Gouguin...... .

>> They were PIcaso, Paul Gouguin...
I am a art teacher who love artists.

>> I am an art Teacher who loves artists.

And I like a raining street as like as he does.
>> Did you mean: And I like looking at the street when it is raining, just like he does.

1. My uncle lives in Mexico City. She lives in Mexico City.
>> HE
2. My friends aren\'t coming. They aren\'t coming.
>> CORRECT
3. Mrs. [Name] is studying English. He is studying English.
>> SHE
4. You and I have to talk about the test. We have to talk about the test.
>> CORRECT
5. Can you help me? Yes, I can help you.
>> CORRECT
6. The tree is going to fall. It is going to fall.
>> CORRECT
7. John and his girlfriend had an argument. They had an argument.
>> CORRECT
8. Jim and I are the same age. We are the same age.
>> CORRECT
9. My passport is in my bag. It is in my bag.
>> CORRECT
10. My cousin George just graduated from high school. He just graduated from high school.

>> CORRECT

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