Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
I was really worried about you.
You should take good care of you although you said it's a small accident.
Anyway, below is the next part of my writings.
See you tomorrow.
In this respect, I hope I can provide good ideas for how to practice politics through my study. This is the reason that I chose to study politics and continue my study in doctoral course.
subtitle : Person Who Passes What One Has Learned to Others
There are many ways that I affect and contribute to realistic politics. More than all, I'm interested in cultivating politicians. This is one of the politics' purpose which has been neglected until now. In connection with cultivating politicians, I want to play a role which passes on what I have learned to others. Actually, teaching people in an interesting way is one of the things I'm good at. Thus, I think going on the doctor's course and being an instructor after obtaining a doctor's degree are the best way to follow my political ideals.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thank you so much for your concern. I\'m fine now. I guess it was just fatigue and dehydration.
Your composition is really good this time. I didn\'t notice that many grammar errors.
Keep it up!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! I was really worried about you.
>> CORRECT! You should take good care of you although you said it\'s a small accident.
>> Although you said that it was a small accident, you should still take good care of yourself.
Anyway, below is the next part of my writings.
>> CORRECT! See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT! In this respect, I hope I can provide good ideas for how to practice politics through my study.
>> CORRECT!
>> for = on
This is the reason that I chose to study politics and continue my study in the doctoral course.>> CORRECT! subtitle : Person Who Passes What One Has Learned to Others>> CORRECT! There are many ways that I affect and contribute to realistic politics.
>> CORRECT!
More than all, I\'m interested in cultivating politicians.
>> Most of all, I\'m interested in cultivating politicians.
This is one of the politics\' purpose which has been neglected until now.
>> CORRECT!
In connection with cultivating politicians, I want to play a role which passes on what I have learned to others.
>> CORRECT!
Actually, teaching people in an interesting way is one of the things I\'m good at.
>> CORRECT!
Thus, I think going on the doctor\'s course and being an instructor after obtaining a doctor\'s degree are the best way to follow my political ideals.
>> CORRECT!
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