Homework

Hello, teacher. According to the weather forecast, I need to stand this hot weather just for a week. Of course, I admit that it's a drop in the ocean comparing to the weather in your country.^^ Today's writing is about the reason for applying for the fellowship. I will explain the reason for applying for Global Ph.D Fellowship("GPF") in three parts. Above all, my research field, East Asian political thoughts, needs financial support. I have felt sorry that East Asian political thoughts is not being paid attention to modern politics due to its atmosphere to pursue practicality. I don't agree with the opinion that my research field is not useful because it lacks current implications. Obviously, political thoughts is the very basis of all fields on politics. It is true that my research field is unpopular, but I feel great responsibility studying my research field. I'm sure that GPF's financial benefit will help me concentrate on my study without swimming with the tide.

Hi Kaylee! Just bear with the weather for now. I\'m sure autumn is just around the corner. You\'ll feel fresh and cool again in no time. I checked your writing below. Please inform me if I misunderstood anything. ^^ Good luck! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! According to the weather forecast, I need to stand this hot weather just for a week. >> CORRECT! Of course, I admit that it\'s a drop in the ocean comparing to the weather in your country.^^>> CORRECT! Today\'s writing is about the reason for applying for the fellowship. >> CORRECT! I will explain the reason for applying for Global Ph.D Fellowship(\"GPF\") in three parts. >> CORRECT! Above all, my research field, East Asian political thoughts, needs financial support. >> CORRECT! I have felt sorry that East Asian political thoughts is not being paid attention to modern politics due to its atmosphere to pursue practicality. >> I have felt sorry that the East Asian political thoughts is not being paid attention to in modern politics due to its nature of pursuing practicality. I don\'t agree with the opinion that my research field is not useful because it lacks current implications. >> CORRECT! Obviously, political thoughts is the very basis of all fields on politics. >> CORRECT! >> in It is true that my research field is unpopular, but I feel a great responsibility in studying my research field. >> CORRECT! I\'m sure that GPF\'s financial benefit will help me concentrate on my study without swimming with the tide. >> CORRECT!