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2015-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. In your correction yesterday, 'its nature of pursuing practicality', how about 'tendency' instead of 'nature'? In this sentence, I wanted to describe that pursuing practicality is the mainstream of modern politics. I'm not sure what is the better vocabulary. Could you recommend the better one? Below is the next part. Next, applying for GPF provides me a great opportunity to improve my global competence. Actually, I have been able to check and improve my English ability while preparing these documents in English. I must admit that applying for this fellowship itself is a meaningful experience to enhance my global competence. If I can write these documents successfully, it would be one of the evidence that I am a qualified applicant.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I checked your writing below. Please let me know if there\'s anything that I missed. ^^ In that sentence, I think it is better to use \'tendency\'. :) Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! In your correction yesterday, \'its nature of pursuing practicality\', how about \'tendency\' instead of \'nature\'? >> CORRECT! In this sentence, I wanted to describe that pursuing practicality is the mainstream of modern politics. >> CORRECT! I\'m not sure what is the better vocabulary. >> CORRECT! Could you recommend the better one? >> CORRECT! Below is the next part. >> CORRECT! Next, applying for GPF provides me a great opportunity to improve my global competence. >> CORRECT! Actually, I have been able to check and improve my English ability while preparing these documents in English. >> CORRECT!  I must admit that applying for this fellowship itself is a meaningful experience to enhance my global competence. >> CORRECT! If I can write these documents successfully, it would be one of the evidences that I am a qualified applicant. >> CORRECT!

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