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2015-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane! This subject is profound. So I am worried that I wrote a strange writting. Take care and have a nice weekend! Being human is like cameleon. Human can change as the situation. When human faces a terrible situation, human reacts and handles myself as that situation. Actually I think that it can't define about being human. Human is very complicated exsits.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! As the questin is profound, so your answer is. You did a great job in writing your answer. Keep it up! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane!>> Correct This subject is profound. >> Correct So I am worried that I wrote a strange writting.>> I am worried that I wrote a strange thing.  Take care and have a nice weekend!>> Correct Being human is like cameleon.>> Humans are like cameleons.  Human can change as the situation. >> Humans can change depending on the situation.  When human faces a terrible situation, human reacts and handles myself as that situation.>> When a person faces a terrible situation, he reacts and handles himself accordingly. Actually I think that it can\'t define about being human. >> Actually, I think it\'s not enough to define what humans really are.  Human is very complicated exsits. >> Humans are complicated beings. 

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