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Hello, teacher. I feel sorry that the half of this summer vacation was over. Of course, comparing to you who don't have a long vacation, my complain is noting serious. ^^ Anyway, below is the next part. Lastly, if I am selected for the scholarship student, it would serve as a momentum to gain confidence in my rest of doctor's course. As a Ph.D. candidate from a local university, I often feel frustrated whenever I think the fact that all professors in my department received their Ph.D. degree from abroad, not in Korea. However, being a scholarship student for GPF tells me that I'm a deserved person to keep my studying. I'm sure that I will recover my confidence as a local student through becoming a scholarship student for GPF. I heartily hope I show that investing in local students is worthwhile and meaningful.

Hi Kaylee! Great job in this composition. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I feel sorry that the half of this summer vacation was over. >> CORRECT! OR >> I feel sorry that the summer vacation is halfway finished.Of course, comparing to you who don\'t have a long vacation, my complain is noting serious. ^^>> Of course, compared to you, who doesn\'t have a long vacation, my complaint is nothing serious.Anyway, below is the next part.>> CORRECT! Lastly, if I am selected for the scholarship student, it would serve as a momentum to gain confidence in my rest of doctor\'s course. >> Lastly, if I am selected for the scholarship, it would serve as a momentum to gain confidence for the rest of my doctor\'s course. As a Ph.D. candidate from a local university, I often feel frustrated whenever I think about the fact that all professors in my department received their Ph.D. degree from abroad, not in Korea. >> CORRECT! However, being a scholarship student for GPF tells me that I\'m a deserved person to keep my studying. >> However, being a scholar student for GPF tells me that I deserve it and I need it to keep on studying. I\'m sure that I will recover my confidence as a local student through becoming a scholarship student for GPF. >> I\'m sure that I will regain my confidence as a local student through becoming a scholar student for GPF. I heartily hope I show that investing in local students is worthwhile and meaningful. >> I am sincerely hoping that I could show them that investing in local students is worthwhile and meaningful.