Homework

2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. According to a recipe for pickled chili, I can eat it after two weeks. If I taste the pickled chili, I would talk to you later. Today's writing is about the reason I chose my university. (Of two senteces, what is the better?) The three reasons why I chose my university are as follows. I have three reasons why I chose my university. They are as follows. Firstly, my university is one of the few universities where I can study East Asian political thought. Many universities tend not yo have separate faculty for Asian political thought. It is even usual that there is no professor in charge of political thought. However, we have three professors for political thought and one of them has specialized in teaching East Asian political thought. I was deeply impressed by the specialization of these faculties.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! I checked your writing below. I think the first sentence is better. :) Let me know if there\'s something that I misinterpreted here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! According to a recipe for pickled chili, I can eat it after two weeks. >> CORRECT! If I taste the pickled chili, I would talk to you later.>> I will tell you about it later after I taste it.Today\'s writing is about the reason that I chose my university.>> CORRECT! (Of two senteces, what is the better?) >> Of the two sentences, which is better? The three reasons why I chose my university are as follows. >> CORRECT! I have three reasons why I chose my university. >> CORRECT! They are as follows.>> CORRECT! Firstly, my university is one of the few universities where I can study East Asian political thought. >> CORRECT! >> my university = it is Many universities tend not to have a separate faculty for Asian political thought. >> CORRECT!   It is even usual that there is no professor in charge of political thought. >> Usually there is no professor in charge of political thought as well. However, we have three professors for political thought and one of them specialized in teaching East Asian political thought. >> CORRECT! I was deeply impressed by the specialization of these faculties. >> CORRECT!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·