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HI Jane! I'm sorry that I was outside yesterday. I hadn't much time for the homework. So I writing this today. Take care and have a nice day! People think that I am not silent.but I am silent and shy. They think that I am cool. but I am timid .I make an effort to change timid ability to cool ability. so they look at it. I didn't drink a lot. however they think that I drink well. I like drinking but I didn't drink well maybe?

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I admire you because you always make it a point to answer your homework even when you are very busy. Keep it up! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ HI Jane!>> Correct I\'m sorry that I was outside yesterday. >> Correct I hadn\'t much time for the homework.>> I didn\'t have time for the homework.  So I writing this today.>> So I\'m writing this today.  Take care and have a nice day!>> Correct People think that I am not silent. >> Correct But I am silent and shy.>> Correct They think that I am cool. >> Correct But I am timid. >> Correct I make an effort to change timid ability to cool ability. >> I am making an effort to change my personality from being timid to cool.  so they look at it.>> They can witness it.  I didn\'t drink a lot. >> I can\'t drink much.  however they think that I drink well. >> However, they think that I can drink well.  I like drinking but I didn\'t drink well maybe? >> I like drinking, but I can\'t drink well.