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2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

hello Jane! have a good day! 1. We were (walked) through the park when we saw a squirrel. 2. We chose the (largeest) pumpkin. 3. There was great (happyness) when the prizes were announced. 4. Carlos tries to be (helpful). 5. She is a very (likeable) person.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I hope you will have a good time with your mom today. Make her feel special because it\'s her birthday. Take care and enjoy! T. JanE ^^ Hello Jane!>> Correct Have a good day!>> Correct 1. We were (walked) through the park when we saw a squirrel. >> We were (walking) through the park when we saw a squirrel. 2. We chose the (largeest) pumpkin. >> We chose the (largest) pumpkin. 3. There was great (happyness) when the prizes were announced. >> There was great (happiness) when the prizes were announced. 4. Carlos tries to be (helpful). >> Correct 5. She is a very (likeable) person. >> Correct

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