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2015-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Today is 'malbok'. Traditionally, we have three days that signal the beginning, middle, and end of the hottest time of the year. 'malbok' is the last one. If 'malbok' passes, the weather will be really more cool. Anyway, below is the next part. Second, in addition to coursework, my university provides various learning opportunities for students. For example, we can take a lecture from some of the world's most famous professors of politics once a month. We also have invited local researchers and held a seminar once a month. Among those benefits, it is truly useful for students to have help from research professors of Brain Korea 21. Whenever I want to get some advices, I can consult with them on my writings in addition to my academic adviser. As a student, I think these advantages are attractive enough.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I\'m glad it\'s getting cooler there. You don\'t need to visit an old palace anymore. ^^ I checked your writing below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Today is \'malbok\'. >> CORRECT! Traditionally, we have three days that signal the beginning, middle, and end of the hottest time of the year. >> CORRECT! \'malbok\' is the last one. >> CORRECT! If \'malbok\' passes, the weather will be really more cool. >> Once \'malbok\' passes, the weather will be cooler.Anyway, below is the next part. >> CORRECT! Second, in addition to course work, my university provides various learning opportunities for students. >> CORRECT! For example, we can take a lecture from some of the world\'s most famous professors of politics once a month. >> CORRECT! We also have invited local researchers and held a seminar once a month. >> CORRECT! Among those benefits, it is truly useful for students to have help from research professors of Brain Korea 21. >> CORRECT! >> get Whenever I want to get some advices, I can consult with them on my writings in addition to my academic adviser. >> Whenever I want to get some advice I could consult them about my writings, in addition to my academic adviser\'s help.  As a student, I think these advantages are attractive enough. >> CORRECT!

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