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2015-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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The most boring thing about movies is romance movie. When I see the romantic movie, I am boring. This is not powerful. so I don't remember the story. I would like to see a action moive rather than remance movie.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Well, I like romantic movies but not as much as I like romantic-comedy ones. I like action movies, too. I don\'t like horror movies though. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ The most boring thing about movies is romance movie.>> The most boring movies are romantic ones.  When I see the romantic movie, I am boring.>> When I see a romantic movie, I feel bored.  This is not powerful. >> They don\'t have powerful stories.  so I don\'t remember the story.>> So I don\'t remember them.  I would like to see a action moive rather than remance movie. >> I\'d rather see an action movie than a romantic one. 

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