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학생이 쓴 원문
The most difficult decision that I have made is about my career.
I have never imagined that I became a nurse.
After graduating university, I didn't know what to do and how to live.
It was time Korea has bad economy state. It's very hard season to find a job.
I decided reentering nurse university.
That changed my all life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I know that you have the determination to achieve your goals in life.
Just put your best foot forward in order for you to be successful.
Have a great day!!!
T.Jeny
The most difficult decision that I have made is about my career.>>correctI have never imagined that I became a nurse. >>I\'ve never imagined that I will become a nurse. After graduating university, I didn\'t know what to do and how to live. >>After graduating from university, I didn\'t know what do and how to live my life.It was time Korea has bad economy state. It\'s very hard season to find a job.>>Korea was in recession at that time and it was difficult to find a job.I decided reentering nurse university. >>So I decided to enroll in nursing.
>>So I decided to go to university and study nursing.That changed my all life.
>>That changed my whole life.
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