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2015-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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The most difficult decision that I have made is about my career. I have never imagined that I became a nurse. After graduating university, I didn't know what to do and how to live. It was time Korea has bad economy state. It's very hard season to find a job. I decided reentering nurse university. That changed my all life.

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Hello [이름], I know that you have the determination to achieve your goals in life. Just put your best foot forward in order for you to be successful. Have a great day!!! T.Jeny   The most difficult decision that I have made is about my career.>>correctI have never imagined that I became a nurse. >>I\'ve never imagined that I will become a nurse. After graduating university, I didn\'t know what to do and how to live. >>After graduating from university, I didn\'t know what do and how to live my life.It was time Korea has bad economy state. It\'s very hard season to find a job.>>Korea was in recession at that time and it was difficult to find a job.I decided reentering nurse university. >>So I decided to enroll in nursing. >>So I decided to go to university and study nursing.That changed my all life. >>That changed my whole life.

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