homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I can't leave without my baby.
Because I love him.
He is my soul and my everything.
He is a most precious treasure among my belongs.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Nice job on your essay!!! I am impressed with how you explain your opinion about our topic, I know that this could enhance your skills in English, so keep it up!!!
God really gave us a wonderful blessing in life and it is the best gift that we need to treasure.
Have a wonderful day!!!
T. Jeny
I can\'t leave without my baby.
>>I can\'t live without my baby.Because I love him.
>>correctHe is my soul and my everything.
>>He is my everything.He is a most precious treasure among my belongs.
>>He is the most precious treasure from God.
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