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2015-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. In today's class, I stuttered much. So, I'm feeling sorry about that. T.T Is my wrting a little longer? There are many kinds of documents that I have to submit to the scholarship foundation. However, there would be 1~2 pages more. Maybe, I can complete this until next week. Thank you so musch for your kind corrections. Below is the next part. I expect this way of scholastic exchange will produce meaningful improvement in my study. Consequently, I chose my university because of the above mentioned reasons. I think the reasons are atill perfectly valid now. Therefore, I'm sure my university is the best school for me to grow as a scholar.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Oh, no worries! I don\'t mind checking your composition.  I\'m more than happy to help you. Good luck!

Please review my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
In today\'s class, I stuttered much.

>> I stuttered a lot in our class today.
So, I\'m feeling sorry about that. T.T

>> CORRECT!
Is my wrting a little longer?

>> Is my composition too long?

There are many kinds of documents that I have to submit to the scholarship foundation.

>> I have to submit many kinds of documents to the scholarship foundation.

However, there would be 1~2 pages more.

>> I still have to write one or two more pages.

Maybe, I can complete this until next week.

>> CORRECT!

Thank you so musch for your kind corrections.

>> Thank you so much for correcting them.
Below is the next part.

>> CORRECT!
I expect this way of scholastic exchange will produce a meaningful improvement in my study.

>> CORRECT!
Consequently, I chose my university because of the above mentioned reasons.

>> CORRECT!

I think the reasons are still perfectly valid now.

>> CORRECT!

>> still

Therefore, I\'m sure my university is the best school for me to grow as a scholar.

>> Therefore, I\'m sure my university is the best place for me to grow as a scholar.

 

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