Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Oh, no worries! I don\'t mind checking your composition. I\'m more than happy to help you. Good luck!
Please review my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
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In today\'s class, I stuttered much.
>> I stuttered a lot in our class today.
So, I\'m feeling sorry about that. T.T
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Is my wrting a little longer?
>> Is my composition too long?
There are many kinds of documents that I have to submit to the scholarship foundation.
>> I have to submit many kinds of documents to the scholarship foundation.
However, there would be 1~2 pages more.
>> I still have to write one or two more pages.
Maybe, I can complete this until next week.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you so musch for your kind corrections.
>> Thank you so much for correcting them.
Below is the next part.
>> CORRECT!
I expect this way of scholastic exchange will produce a meaningful improvement in my study.
>> CORRECT!
Consequently, I chose my university because of the above mentioned reasons.
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I think the reasons are still perfectly valid now.
>> CORRECT!
>> still
Therefore, I\'m sure my university is the best school for me to grow as a scholar.
>> Therefore, I\'m sure my university is the best place for me to grow as a scholar.
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