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2015-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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hi Jane! todya is friday! have a good weekend and see you monday~ If I were a bird I would fly the sky. when I see birds, they look free. no having problems and anything else, I would like to fly the sky freely. If it is done, I want a strong bird. I don't want to dead early.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I\'ve always imagined being free like a bird. If I were a bird, I would be an eagle.  Take care and enjoy the weekend! T. JanE ^^ Hi, Jane!>> Correct todya is friday!>> Today is Friday!  have a good weekend and see you monday~>> Have a good weekend and see you on Monday! If I were a bird I would fly the sky.>> If I were a bird, I would fly to the sky.  when I see birds, they look free.>> Birds look like they\'re free.  no having problems and anything else, I would like to fly the sky freely.>> Without any problem, I would like to fly to the sky freely.  If it is done, I want a strong bird. >> I would like to be a strong bird.  I don\'t want to dead early. >> I don\'t want to die early. 

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