Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.While it wasn't great the movie we,so last night wasn't bad either.
2.Paula was tired,hungry and grumpy.
3.No,that isn't what I said.
4.If you lie to your friends,they won't trust you in the future.
5.It was the Belgiang,not the French who won the tournament.
6.The current CEO Jhon Williams doesn't support,this course of action.
7.I forgot my wallet at home,but I have my bus pass with me.
8.On May,20 1980 the troops captured the city.
9.He speaks French,Italian and German.
10.Having tried that soup before Rebecca knew,it was tasty.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! A frabjous Monday to you!
How was your weekend? Thank you for doing your homework, [이름].
I notice in your composition that you don\'t use a space after the punctuation mark, comma. Remember that there is always a space every after a punctuation mark if followed by another word or sentence. Anyway, you did good job in doing your homework. Keep practicing [이름]!
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~Teacher Kris~ (^.^)
1.While it wasn\'t great the movie we,so last night wasn\'t bad either.
>> While it wasn\'t great, the movie we saw last night wasn\'t bad either.
2. Paula was tired,hungry and grumpy.
>> Paula was tired, hungry and grumpy.
3.No,that isn\'t what I said.
>> No, that isn\'t what I said.
4.If you lie to your friends,they won\'t trust you in the future.
>> If you lie to your friends, they won\'t trust you in the future.5.It was the Belgiang,not the French who won the tournament.
>> It was the Belgians, not the French, who won the tournament.
6.The current CEO Jhon Williams doesn\'t support,this course of action.
>> The current CEO, Jhon Williams, doesn\'t support this course of action.
7.I forgot my wallet at home,but I have my bus pass with me.
>> I forgot my wallet at home, but I have my bus pass with me.8.On May,20 1980 the troops captured the city.
>> On May 20, 1980, the troops captured the city.
9.He speaks French,Italian and German.
>> He speaks French, Italian and German.10.Having tried that soup before Rebecca knew,it was tasty.
>> Having tried that soup before, Rebecca knew it was tasty.
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