Homework

Hello, teacher. It feels like fall althought it's still hot in the middle of the day. Getting cool means that I am at the end of my summer vacation, right? As I told you in our class today, I'm really, really feeling sad about that. Today's writing is about the reason and background for choosing my major. I have studied politics since I entered a university. As previously stated, I have been interested in a better life for all of us. Moreover, I believe that politics could change our world. More precisely, I think that the quality of politics determines the quality of our lives. I have hoped I become a influential person who affects making people's lives better. I am interested in fundamental matters such as political thoughts, philosophy and system, although there are plenty of ways for me to accomplish my purpose. I chose political thoughts as my major because I had thought that political thoughts, one of the specific majors in politics, is the starting point to study politics.

Hello Kaylee! They say nothing lasts forever. Even your summer vacation. Hahaha! I\'m sorry but you have to come back to the real world now. Even Cinderella went back to being a \'house maid\' when the clock struck 12. I checked your composition, please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It feels like fall althought it\'s still hot in the middle of the day. >> CORRECT! Getting cool means that I am at the end of my summer vacation, right? >> The fact that it\'s getting cooler means it\'s the end of my summer vacation, right?As I told you in our class today, I\'m really, really feeling sad about that.>> CORRECT! Today\'s writing is about the reason and background for choosing my major.>> CORRECT! I have studied Politics since I entered a university. >> CORRECT! >> a = the As previously stated, I have been interested in a better life for all of us. >> CORRECT! Moreover, I believe that politics could change our world. >> CORRECT! More precisely, I think that the quality of politics determines the quality of our lives. >> CORRECT! I have hoped I become a influential person who affects making people\'s lives better. >> I am hoping to become an influential person who can make people\'s lives better. I am interested in fundamental matters such as political thoughts, philosophy and system, although there are plenty of ways for me to accomplish my purpose. >> CORRECT! I chose political thoughts as my major because I had thought that political thoughts, one of the specific majors in politics, is the starting point to study politics. >> CORRECT!