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Hello, teacher. I'm going to meet my academic adviser thin afternoon to consult with him about the class next semester. We probably might continue the class about the former President of Korea, [이름] Dae Jung next semester. I have to help him prepare for the class syllabus. Helping him can be a big help for me to understand teaching skills. However, there is something burden becasude this syllabus determines many students' class. Anyway, below are some separate sentences. Therefore, I believe that it is worth to study politics, and I am hoping to become an influential person who can make people's lives better. Studying politics is one of the steps to accomplish my goal. However, I didn't think that I should major in political thoughts from the beginning. In the early part of my undergraduate days, I was interested in international politics. The explosion of interest in international politics after the post-Cold war would have had a influence on me.

Hello Kaylee! I checked your writing below. Please review my corrections. Good luck with that syllabus. Do your best! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I\'m going to meet my academic adviser thin afternoon to consult with him about the class next semester. >> CORRECT! >> this We probably might continue the class about the former President of Korea, [이름] Dae Jung next semester. >> We might continue the class about the former President of Korea, [이름] Dae Jung, next semester. I have to help him prepare for the class syllabus. >> CORRECT! Helping him can be a big help for me to understand his teaching skills. >> CORRECT! However, there is something burden becasude this syllabus determines many students\' class.>> However, there is some pressure because this syllabus will determine many students\' classes.Anyway, below are some separate sentences.>> CORRECT! Therefore, I believe that it is worth to study politics, and I am hoping to become an influential person who can make people\'s lives better.>> Therefore, I believe that studying politics is worth my time, and I am hoping to become an influential person who can make people\'s lives better.Studying politics is one of the steps to accomplish my goal.>> CORRECT! OR >> Studying politics will take me one step closer to accomplishing my goal. However, I didn\'t think that I should major in political thoughts from the beginning.>> CORRECT! In the early part of my undergraduate days, I was interested in international politics.>> CORRECT! The explosion of interest in international politics after the post-Cold war would have had a influence on me. >> CORRECT! >> might, an