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Money is the most important thing in my life. Actually, I think there is no more valuable thing than money in capitalism. I am studying for high wages now. And also, I will exert my effort to be rich. I feel that money can do anything except for something concerned with a human mind. Consequently, I am eager to earn money a lot.

Happy Wednesday! Your sentences are meaningful and are full of ideas. I just want you to avoid simple mistakes like the following. I will see you in class later. Bye. ~~T. Jamie^^   Money is the most important thing in my life. >> CORRECTActually, I think there is no more valuable thing than money in capitalism. >> Actually, I think there is nothing more valuable than money in the aspect of capitalism.I am studying for high wages now. And also, I will exert my effort to be rich. >> I am studying to earn a high wage in the future. Also, I will exert my effort to be rich.OR: >> I am studying to have a high-paying job in the future. Also, I will exert my effort to be rich. I feel that money can do anything except for something concerned with a human mind.>> I feel that money can do anything except for something concerning the human mind. Consequently, I am eager to earn money a lot. >> Consequently, I am eager to earn a lot of money.