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2015-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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hi Jane! have a good day. I am nervous myself because I didn't improve my speaking level. but I will cheear up. see you tommorow! I want to desribe it. But I think that I don't remember greatest passion. I didn't have passion about something passionately as ohter people. I really would like to find passion.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! DOn\'t worry about your improvement in English. Learning takes a long process, so don\'t fret when you haven\'t seen much improvement yet. Be patient and keep believing in yourself. You can do it! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane!>> Correct Have a good day.>> Correct I am nervous myself because I didn\'t improve my speaking level.>> I\'m worried because I haven\'t improved yet. But I will cheer up.>> Correct See you tommorow!>> CorrectI want to desribe it. >> Correct But I think that I don\'t remember greatest passion. >> I can\'t remember my greatest passion. I didn\'t have passion about something passionately as ohter people. >> I am not passionate about anything like other people. I really would like to find passion. >> I would really like to find my own passion.  

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