homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hi Jane!
have a good day.
I am nervous myself because I didn't improve my speaking level.
but I will cheear up.
see you tommorow!
I want to desribe it.
But I think that I don't remember greatest passion.
I didn't have passion about something passionately as ohter people.
I really would like to find passion.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! DOn\'t worry about your improvement in English. Learning takes a long process, so don\'t fret when you haven\'t seen much improvement yet. Be patient and keep believing in yourself. You can do it! Take care and have a good day!
T. JanE ^^
Hi Jane!>> Correct
Have a good day.>> Correct
I am nervous myself because I didn\'t improve my speaking level.>> I\'m worried because I haven\'t improved yet.
But I will cheer up.>> Correct
See you tommorow!>> CorrectI want to desribe it. >> Correct
But I think that I don\'t remember greatest passion. >> I can\'t remember my greatest passion.
I didn\'t have passion about something passionately as ohter people. >> I am not passionate about anything like other people.
I really would like to find passion. >> I would really like to find my own passion.
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