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학생이 쓴 원문
I help my neighbors many times.
someone is putting something heavy up,
I go to there and put things up together.
I was happy who help them.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Jun!
T.G.I.F.!!!
It\'s nice to hear that you help your neighbors.
I admire you for being a great person.
It is really good to help others.
So if there will be a time that we need help, they will do the same good deed to us.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
I help my neighbors many times.
>> Correct
>> Better: I often help my neighbors.
someone is putting something heavy up,
>> Did you mean: When someone carries something heavy to his house.
I go to there and put things up together.
>> Did you mean: I go there and carry it.
I was happy who help them.
>> I was happy when I helped them.
>> OR: I was happy to help them.
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