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2015-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

have a nice weekend! At first week, I saw on[이름]e hard. But my mind loosen gradually. At that time I tired of seeing on[이름]e. I wanted to play every day. However I had to see on[이름]e according english because I need to certification for gradutaion.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! You never fail to answer your homework. Keep it up! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Have a nice weekend!>> Correct At first week, I saw on[이름]e hard.>> On the first week, it was hard for me to be on[이름]e.  But my mind loosen gradually. >> But my mind loosened gradually.  At that time I tired of seeing on[이름]e.>> At that time, I\'m tired of being on[이름]e.  I wanted to play every day. >> Correct However I had to see on[이름]e according english because I need to certification for gradutaion. >> However, I need to be on[이름]e and practice English because I need a certification for my graduation. 

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