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I want to say the influence of massmedia.
Our life is exposed to media.
Advertisement stimulates to follow their strategy.
For example, If we see the new product on the TV, we feel to buy it.
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I want to say the influence of massmedia.
>>I want to say the influence of mass media.
Our life is exposed to media.
>>correct
Advertisement stimulates to follow their strategy.
>>Advertisement stimulates us to follow their strategies.
For example, If we see the new product on the TV, we feel to buy it.
>>For example, if we see a new product on TV, we want to buy it.
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