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2015-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Tthe way my life would be different is to have a good job. I wish I have a job to envy anyother. The way is to get many friend and nice boyfriend. And the way is to go a various of countries.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You\'ll get a job soon after you finish university, so don\'t worry. For now, you just have to be a good student. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Tthe way my life would be different is to have a good job.>> My life would be different if I have a good job.  I wish I have a job to envy anyother.>> I wish I have a job so I wouldn\'t envy others.  The way is to get many friend and nice boyfriend.>> I would have many friends and meet a nice boyfriend.  And the way is to go a various of countries. >> I could also go to various countries. 

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